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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: My first guide. Dont know how well the items willwork, as havent really tried the build yet. the reason for this is that im not at home, and i dont have a proper computer with me.
What I'd like you to focus on: The items primary. Ill rework formatting when i get my hands on a proper computer
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-the-healthy-killer-updated-101717

EDIT: The Tankren sectionis based upon the results of a friends game where he got 15-2-21.
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lefze wrote:

Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: My first guide. Dont know how well the items willwork, as havent really tried the build yet. the reason for this is that im not at home, and i dont have a proper computer with me.
What I'd like you to focus on: The items primary. Ill rework formatting when i get my hands on a proper computer
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-the-healthy-killer-updated-101717


The only thing I can see, before jhoi reviews it, is that you have too little of Mr for an offtank in your first build.You'll go down with a fed annie on their team :P.
Considering Leviathan in your build. I would really not advise having it in your build. Make a section with situational Items explaining when and where to get it and when its best to skip/sell it. I know many ppl aren't stupid building strictly like a guide tells them, but there ARE some of those who will trollvote your guide simply because they didn't get a viable amount of stacks in their game.
Also Leviathan AND warmogs? I would dehort from buying TWO FULL HP Items.
Also it's a big -point that you haven't tested your builds yet.

Try to center the runes like
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[center][icon=Mark Name size=64][icon=Seal Name size=64][icon=Glyph Name size=64][icon=Quintessence Name size=64][/center]

Go a little more In-Depth with your masteries.

Center your Core Item Icons
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[center][/center]

The Item Icons in the section "The Mighty Tankren" are too small. Go with
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[icon=Item name size=64]
. Also
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[center][/center]
them.

Same with the Skills section.

Try to center the Summoner spells icons
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Tried to help jhoi here, cause she's, I quote, "super awesome and stuff" :D I hope you'll get better soon.
If I could help you +rep me ;)

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i have to, the leviathan/warmogs section isnt completed. Its part of a xin-garen lane guide. You will simply pwn everything that moves.

And the thing about my mr is, that it increases with my Courage's passive. And my effective hp will be awesome.

And theformatting will be fixed soon.

Thx for the feedback :D

EDIT: The tankren section is also going to be recommended FOR PROS ONLY. Its purpose is to have a xin in my lane, and feed him like hell so the enemies surrender at 20:00
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@Jhoi don't worry about it.
I can wait, it's not like you haven't already reviewed my old Soraka guide.
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Reviewable Guides
Scrax wrote:

Guide For (champion): Janna
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want an unbiased opinion.
What I'd like you to focus on: My explanations and reasoning.
Guide Link: Here

Aharan wrote:

Guide for:
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know what to improve on in future builds
What I'd like you to focus on: the structure, and if it's easy to read or not
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/corki-insert-creative-name-here-90103


Would you mind reviewing my new Soraka guide? XD
Guide For (champion): Soraka
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Revamped it and want a second opinion
What I'd like you to focus on: Whatever you feel needs to be commented on
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ap-soraka-no-my-horn-doesnt-poke-through-my-deathcap-104646

lefze wrote:

Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: My first guide. Dont know how well the items willwork, as havent really tried the build yet. the reason for this is that im not at home, and i dont have a proper computer with me.
What I'd like you to focus on: The items primary. Ill rework formatting when i get my hands on a proper computer
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-the-healthy-killer-updated-101717

Err, did I miss anyone?

Will get to these later tonight. I'm feeling a bit better, so that's good. But unlike Nighthawk, I still don't live with my parents so I have to go wash the dishes and do the laundry tonight QQ HOWEVER! On the bright side, the boys will be cooking tonight! (like the only other meal they know how to cook besides spaghetti, but still!)

Why are they cooking, you may ask? Because I went out and bought the ingredients like a FIEND IN THE NIGHT AND NOW THEY HAVE TO COOK IT. Bwahahahhahahhahahaha!

... when I'm sick, I'm weird.

@Nameless: <3 You're a friend, why wouldn't I review your guide? Also, I love your avatar, did you make it?
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d'aw...I have a friend...oh wait....XD

Because my guide is only vaguely better than it used to be imo...=P

It's some random image off a pathfinder RPG book...I have a sig wRAth made for me with the same image....if you refresh eighty bajillion times you might see it XD
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******* IT. Just as I remake my guide, they decided to hit Corki with the nerfhammer. Time for a nerf section.
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I decided to give you a sticky on this project here. Maybe ppl will ask here instead of spamming the advert topics...

When you are done with this... just poke me or any other mod to unsticky it.
Did i help you? Click that +Rep

Thanks to jhoijhoi for the sig!
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WOOHOO! congratz on the sticky Jhoi!

(about time, may I add)

Many thanks to Jhoijhoi for my epic sig

If I helped you at all, +Rep
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lol! I was looking everywhere for my thread, panicking that it had been deleted :P

Thanks Dewo :3

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