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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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Scrax wrote:

Guide For (champion): Janna
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want an unbiased opinion.
What I'd like you to focus on: My explanations and reasoning.
Guide Link: Here

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Guide for:
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know what to improve on in future builds
What I'd like you to focus on: the structure, and if it's easy to read or not
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/corki-insert-creative-name-here-90103

Will get to these later tonight :)
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jhoijhoi wrote:

Tefached's Singed Guide

1) Your summoner spells are a tad weird. Ghost is fine, but I'm not sure why you'd bother with Cleanse. Not sure about the utility of Ignite either. Flash is probably a better idea.

Cleanse might seem weird to most, but with Singed it works for a special tactic. It allows super initiation. With it you can bum-rush the enemy carries and ignore all their CC. It's usually not optimal, but it's certainly a pretty good tactic.

Singed is an offtank. So Ignite is lovely for a little extra firepower.

Singed is one of the rare champions that just don't need flash. He's often better off with Cleanse if he needs a GTFO button or just more mobility.
Flash still is pretty good, just not something I'd pick.
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Okay Searz man, there are more than enough Summoner Spells to go around. Also, jhoijhoi, I fix'd the guide! Thoughts? Also there is a big huge thank you on the beginning of it. <3

Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/singed-kiss-my-empowered-bulwark-63450?page=1

Shout out to Xenasis, jhoijhoi for the awesome sigs! /)^3^(\
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Thank you Wrath and Scrax!

Jhoijhoi-
-I went over and read over my guide finding most spelling mistake and grammar mistakes.(Plus One of my friends is currently going over it to see if its good.)-check

-Centered the images-check

-I decided to leave the skill sequence and explaination seperated.So that it's not a big wall of text.-check

-useless skills are just there for a small fun purpose.You could still use them in bot games and ARAMS :3-checks

-The only thing I dont understand was
2) Add in extra paragraph enters to allow for visual flow
Didn't quite know what you meant x_x

Oh I made it like a check to remember which one I did or didn't do ;D
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Would you mind reviewing my new Soraka guide? XD

Guide For (champion): Soraka
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Revamped it and want a second opinion
What I'd like you to focus on: Whatever you feel needs to be commented on
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ap-soraka-no-my-horn-doesnt-poke-through-my-deathcap-104646

If not ignore this post.
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How many times have you remade your build, really? O_o
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This is the first time I've completely redone the guide lol

EDIT: And I went all the way with redoing the guide.
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I'm actually really sick, guys, and I just started university again (no more holidays D:), so I'm going to try and make my throat not feel like sandpaper every time I open my mouth or swallow.

I'll try to get to reviews, but I don't know if I'll get any done today. Also, of course Nameless, I'll review all guides as long as they are in the request review format :3

God. I forgot why uni sucked.
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Take your time with them, jhoi. It's not like we're paying you :)
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<3 Thanks. I know you've been waiting though, I kinda left you hanging. Right now I'm going to debate whether having a shower would be a negative or positive activity to commit in my state, and whether or not I can afford to miss my introductory lecture to Grammar in the Classroom: Theories and Pedagogies.

Sounds tasty.

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