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I don't have a 100 posts, but I am hoping you'll check out my Xin guide. I haven't published it yet, because I was hoping you review it to work out any confusing parts of it. Still under construction, so don't judge too harshly just yet.
Summoner level: 30
Post count: 19 (I know... I am working on it)
Spell check: for the most part yes
Guide for:
Xin Zhao
Why I'd like this reviewed: Don't want to publish my guide if it's not as good as it should be.
What I'd like you to focus on: anything you can find wrong with my guide (ex. not enough color, misconceptions, etc.)
Guide link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/xin-zhao-the-bane-of-squishies-97878
Summoner level: 30
Post count: 19 (I know... I am working on it)
Spell check: for the most part yes
Guide for:
Xin ZhaoWhy I'd like this reviewed: Don't want to publish my guide if it's not as good as it should be.
What I'd like you to focus on: anything you can find wrong with my guide (ex. not enough color, misconceptions, etc.)
Guide link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/xin-zhao-the-bane-of-squishies-97878
Xin Guide
Clicking the Rep button will end the world, do not click it! (Reverse psychology FTW)
Thank to AlexanPT, JakofAllSpaydes,JEFFY40HANDS, KingCasanova and reppinFTC for the amazing signatures.
Clicking the Rep button will end the world, do not click it! (Reverse psychology FTW)
Thank to AlexanPT, JakofAllSpaydes,JEFFY40HANDS, KingCasanova and reppinFTC for the amazing signatures.
other people can't read a guide until it is published....hence the whole point in not publishing it.
>_>
you would have to publish it if you want to show it to her, and then if you want to make a new guide with the edits, archive the published one, and copy and paste everything over to a new guide.
or just unarchive the guide after the edits are made.
>_>
you would have to publish it if you want to show it to her, and then if you want to make a new guide with the edits, archive the published one, and copy and paste everything over to a new guide.
or just unarchive the guide after the edits are made.
Thanks to TRUeLM, Plastictree, Scrax, Xiaowiriamu, foggy12, JahGFX, jhoijhoi, msrobinson, JEFFY40HANDS, Nyoike, MissMaw, and me :) for the sigs!
I published my guide. Would you mind reviewing it?
Xin Guide
Clicking the Rep button will end the world, do not click it! (Reverse psychology FTW)
Thank to AlexanPT, JakofAllSpaydes,JEFFY40HANDS, KingCasanova and reppinFTC for the amazing signatures.
Clicking the Rep button will end the world, do not click it! (Reverse psychology FTW)
Thank to AlexanPT, JakofAllSpaydes,JEFFY40HANDS, KingCasanova and reppinFTC for the amazing signatures.
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Hi Jhoi, I'm back. >:)
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 6412
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Caitlyn
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: New guide and I would appreciate the attention as well as a point out on any obvious flaws.
What I'd like you to focus on: Guide aesthetics and ways to improve it, especially the video section - is it necessary?
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/caitlyn-yordle-killing-101-122238
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 6412
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Caitlyn
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: New guide and I would appreciate the attention as well as a point out on any obvious flaws.
What I'd like you to focus on: Guide aesthetics and ways to improve it, especially the video section - is it necessary?
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/caitlyn-yordle-killing-101-122238
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Post Count: 606
Spelling and Grammar check: In soviet russia, poster spellchecks YOUR guides! I did JUST publish it though, so let me know if you notice anything amiss, including any formatting errors or random text (I had some placeholder text in each section so it would save).
Guide for:
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: I've appreciated your reviews in the past and have usually changed one thing or another to improve my guide as a result. I'll be sure to thank you in my guide this time. ;)
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that comes to mind. Any new and brilliant ideas for new additions would be nice, as it's a very conventional guide at the moment without anything super-unique. Also you've suggested columns on my viable items section in my Noct guide. If I do adopt that format, I will change both, but for now they're just listed vertically.
Guide Link: Rocking Solo Top With Malphite
Side note: Y U NO VISIT MOBAFIRE CHAT ROOM? Or maybe you do, but it's never at the same time as me. We should totally play some time, I can be Ali and you be Vayne or Ashe or somethin.
Looking forward to your review.
EDIT: I'm going to be adding a jungle build and section in the near future. Do you think it would be better to:
A) Slip in the jungle advice into each section (jungle items in the item section, jungle masteries in the mastery section etc.)
B) Create separate sections for jungle tips and disperse them in appropriate places throughout the guide.
C) Create one section for jungling and put it at the end.
Personally I'm thinking C, so it's like a mini-jungle guide for those who want to jungle, while solo top is the main guide.