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Searz wrote:


Looool, he gets his *** handed to him by most champions.

Not at my level he doesn't. At least when I play him.
I'm sure there are "better" champions for solo top, but he transitions really well into lategame. It's a little like jungle rammus, though I would prefer Malph to Rammus in a team fight usually.
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Hello. Have put a little bit of work into my Ryze guide! Was really looking for some advice on improvements! Many thanks!

DaZ

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ryze-no-i-wont-f-ing-die-121834
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DaZzLRaZzL wrote:

Hello. Have put a little bit of work into my Ryze guide! Was really looking for some advice on improvements! Many thanks!

DaZ

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ryze-no-i-wont-f-ing-die-121834

Please read the OP before posting. If you do not follow jhoijhoi's request regulations, your post will be completely ignored. Edit your post with the following format:
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EDIT: You also do not fulfill the 100 post minimum, so jhoi has reserved the right to ignore your request anyway. This measure was taken to reduce the amount of no-effort or unintelligent builds jhoi had to bother reviewing. Don't be mad, because without this rule the line would be a mile long anyway. Post around on the forums and make a name for yourself, then come back and re-submit your request.
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PsiGuard wrote:

Please read the OP before posting. If you do not follow jhoijhoi's request regulations, your post will be completely ignored. Edit your post with the following format:

whats OP? ive been seeing it a lot now. opening posting?


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Meanings of OP:
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Omnomnom Potatoes

(I swear I won't off-topic anymore. I just couldn't help it!)
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I'm busy with university, but I thought I'd update this to show I haven't forgot about anyone (though if I missed your request, just request again!).


!!! University > Reviewing !!!



>>> I will review however many guides I feel like Per Day <<<




ATTENTION: Due to a huge influx of requests, I have now implemented some requirements. This is so I don't end up reviewing a guide who's author doesn't care, or reviewing a guide that is really bad, or reviewing a guide that has not clicked on the link above. If you want me to spend over half an hour reading your guide and writing a reply, you can very well return the favour!

REQUIREMENTS:
- Author must have +100 Posts
- Guide must have been run through a spell and grammar check
- Author must be over Summoner Level 25
- Author must comment on my Ashe guide with their opinion.


If you are LUCKY, your guide will be reviewed by other members, such as: Searz, da_Neo, Rudmed, Bloofyre, Bryun, and Nighthawk. They drop in from time to time to help with my workload. <3

* I will be completely honest in my opinion
* I will not downvote or upvote until I have received a response from my review, and I see you have dropped your opinion of my Ashe guide in the comment section
* I will review your request as soon as physically and mentally possible

* At the completion of my Review, I will post my verdict of your guide here, along with my review (verdicts are featured in the below post)

You must use this format below for submitting a guide for review, otherwise I'll ignore your request. People who just drop their links here will be completely ignored.

Summoner Level:
Post Count (at time of request):
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES/NO
Guide For (champion):
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:
What I'd like you to focus on:
Guide Link:

What do I expect in return? Read/vote on my >> Complete & Comprehensive Compiled Catalogue of Ashe Knowledge <<, +rep me, and a simple thank you would be lovely ^^

OTHER RULES/NOTES:
- Please only submit one guide per request.
- Please do not request a review on a champion who has not been released. I would also prefer to read only guides published on MobaFire.
- If you are rude to me in your response to my review, I will consider not featuring you in the below post.
- If I read your guide. And you have not read the links I have supplied in this post. I will literally asplode. And you will be charged with my death.


Common Things I Repeat In Most Of My Reviews


  • ONE BUILD. Show me one build, the one you use 90% of the time, in your cheat sheet. NO NEED, EVER, to display more than one cheat sheet. All alternative items can be explained in your Situational/Alternative Items section.
  • Good Hands IS ****ING BETTER THAN PERSEVERANCE. Jesus Christ.
  • Colour is good. Too much colour is bad. Find the correct balance.
  • Paragraphical space. Walls of text = bad. Sparse text = bad. Find the correct balance.




Reviewable Guides
Blakhart wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 100
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Vayne
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: My Vayne guide was at #2 for a little while, and it was also the first Vayne guide out on Mobafire. So after revamping it, I wanted it to get reviewed by someone who really knows their stuff, and may be able to assist me with it.
What I'd like you to focus on: Everything plz :D
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/vayne-through-the-shadows-revamped-81123

Kirluu wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 332
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes
Guide For (champion): Alistar (AP)
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'd like to know of whichever way I could possibly improve my guide.
What I'd like you to focus on: The setup mostly, but perhaps just as much the guiding itself.
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/alistar-the-ability-powered-cow-96441
Kirluu~

VKZ95 wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 101
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes
Guide For (champion): Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to improve my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything I can add or change to make my guide better
Guide Link: Mordekaiser

This guide has been reviewed by you before but I have changed it a lot since the last time you saw it

Siveo wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 115 with this one
Spell & Grammar check completed: I did it but English is not my foreign language so ...
Guide For (champion): Shen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide I've made, looking for some comments on how I play with him!
What I'd like you to focus on: Uhm, everything?
My Shen Build

theBMB wrote:

Summoner Level:30
Post Count (at time of request):like 700 I think
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For: items
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:Need feedback and exposure
What I'd like you to focus on:Formatting
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/in-depth-item-guide-97205


Summoner lvl: 30
Post count: 251
Spelling and grammar: I believe so O.o
Guide for: lee sin
Why? I'm pretty new(kind of), so I still want more advice and maybe things i can improve on(I know there's lots)
What to focus on: anything you see fit. Perhaps I should go more in depth....hmm
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/listen-to-their-heartbeat-a-jungle-lee-sin-build-116481

Keels wrote:

Summoner level: 30
Post count: 555
Spell/ Grammar Check complete? Always. Yes.
Guide for: Singed
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: Jhoi , your making a guide guide was a huge influence. I listened last time to your criticisms of my Renekton build, and I think it paid off. Plus duff's kinda been trawling my builds a bit, and I'd like a second opinion. No offense to him, I've been listening, but a second opinion would be nice.
What I'd like you to focus on: Do I need some more humor? I worked pretty hard to make it look nice, and I'd like to see what you think of it. Is the strategy described sound? Anything you can think of. Unless this is a bad time. I looked to blow people away on this guide.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/singed-his-chemical-romance-ap-hp-99768

Quoted:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): a bit over 100 last time I check'd.
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES, but I am 14yrs old, studied English for around 8yrs. I'm not perfect.
Guide For (champion): Kennen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to improve it :)
What I'd like you to focus on: I don't know, about everything.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kennen-the-off-tank-ninja-102793

Khazem wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 101
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes
Guide For: Nasus
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would like to have a more experienced Mobafire users opinion, as this is my first guide. I've also recently completely remade it so I'd like some fresh opinions on that.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything I can improve on, anything I forgot to add or could add, anything I could do to make it look better.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nasus-whys-this-tank-hitting-me-for-half-my-health-107987

Xiron wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 309
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes
Guide For: Wukong
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: You gave me the advise to archive my old wukong guide and create a new one. Then you'd read it again. Did it. Also i want to get my guide known.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you can find.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-u-no-steal-bananas-new-123062

PsiGuard wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 606
Spelling and Grammar check: In soviet russia, poster spellchecks YOUR guides! I did JUST publish it though, so let me know if you notice anything amiss, including any formatting errors or random text (I had some placeholder text in each section so it would save).
Guide for: Malphite
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: I've appreciated your reviews in the past and have usually changed one thing or another to improve my guide as a result. I'll be sure to thank you in my guide this time. ;)
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that comes to mind. Any new and brilliant ideas for new additions would be nice, as it's a very conventional guide at the moment without anything super-unique. Also you've suggested columns on my viable items section in my Noct guide. If I do adopt that format, I will change both, but for now they're just listed vertically.
Guide Link: Rocking Solo Top With Malphite


Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 6412
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Caitlyn
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: New guide and I would appreciate the attention as well as a point out on any obvious flaws.
What I'd like you to focus on: Guide aesthetics and ways to improve it, especially the video section - is it necessary?
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/caitlyn-yordle-killing-101-122238


Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 101 as of this post I believe
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES Firefox grabs spelling errors with underlines as I type so the only ones that might have been missed are ones that my eyes couldn't pick out. Bad vision messes me up sometimes :(
Guide For (champion): Sona
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'm always looking for feedback on the guide itself. I take pride in this guide.
What I'd like you to focus on: Format and content mostly. General advice will be appreciated of course.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sona-super-support-revamped-for-support-overhaul-77657


Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 2535
Spell & Grammar check completed: Spelling-yes, grammar-mostly
Guide For (champion): Kayle
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would like to see some constructive criticism, I have some sheep vote and "Tank Kayle is for noobs" kind of comments, but nothing particularly helpful lately.
What I'd like you to focus on: Whatever you feel needs commenting on
Guide Link: Kayle, Paladin of the League

ShadowNet wrote:

Summoner Level:30
Post Count (at time of request):274
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes
Guide For (champion): Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To make it perfect. 3rd time I'm submitting, feels like going to a doctor.
What I'd like you to focus on: Everything, by everything I mean everything. Make 30 points instead of 10 so I would submit less. :d
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/carry-me-morde-108278

NicknameMy wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request):564
Spell & Grammar check completed: Not really, i cannot do it^^. Google Translate sucks...
Guide For (champion): Master Yi
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Re-Review, I changed many things around. It is now more a general Yi guide with the focus at "Final" Yi.
What I'd like you to focus on: The changed things.
Guide Link: "Final" Yi, King of Jungle

I know some of these are out of order, when I open things in a new tab they tend to go everywhere, so sorry about that.

I'm also sorry about keeping you all waiting, it's just that university is actually hard this semester, requiring me to attend classes (I know, I'm amazing), do assignments earlier, and I'm going to have to study HARD for this ******ed Problem Solving in-class Exam for algebra and calculus =.=

I'll try to get reviewing soon. I don't promise that I'll be finished with the list tonight, or tomorrow, or on the weekend. But I will try and make my way through it. If my review is too rushed for you, please don't hesitate to come back with a new request :)

Sincerely,
jhoijhoi
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Algebra = only math class I had an "A" in... if it's algebra 2... that's a different story.
Calculus = wow... gj, Idfk how to do that.

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Did I help you, or do anything you really liked? Press that +rep button for me :D
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So I finally got over 100 posts

Summoner Level:30
Post Count:103
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For: Poppy
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: having some major gaming opinion on my unique build
What I'd like you to focus on: gameplay, guide form
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/harder-better-faster-stronger-115842

Looking forward to it.
As I already stated I commented you Vayne build a week ago, still haven't commented your ashe build as I don't really play ashe, but if you really need that I will.

For all you questions about jungling




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Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request - counting this post): 101
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES (I'm German so please don't expect perfect English. But I did my best)
Guide For (champion): Leona
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I put a lot work in my guide. I wanted to give players a well written and in-depth guide to Leona as she is a real powerful and funny champ to play. A review would help improving it.
What I'd like you to focus on: When reading my guide you should focus on anything that is important for yourself as I want a honest opinion.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/daughter-of-amun-ra-an-indepth-guide-to-leona-101449?page=1
Please notice: If you just commented my post or updated your guide please let me know - by writing an PN - to get new feedback / a new vote. I can't have an eye on all the guides I'm commenting.

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