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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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SR APC Viktor
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4.5/6
DATE
05/08/13


GrandmasterD's APC Viktor Guide Review
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name: noobnait
guide: King Kha'zox
Read Guide: Yes
Spell Check: Yes
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Guide For: Me.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because I am willing to either add or perfectionize the actual information.
What I'd like you to focus on: Everything.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/out-of-elo-hell-series-top-lane-jayce-341800
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Name: YeaISupport. My Summoner IGN: iPlay4Heal (if you want to know)
Link: Here!
One does not simply make a guide without reading Jhoijhoi's Karthus guide.
Spell check: Yes ma'am.

Would love:

  • Your feedback about my items. Lots of them being expensive and unique, but some of those items, I did test (Liandry, Zhonya, Rylai) and also were recommended by people like Astrolia and Xpecial, and some of the items are from Burning Bush Zyra variant :)
  • How can I improve my general BBCode? This is still my second guide, so I need a lot of (advanced) helps!
  • Since my aspiration is being a teacher, I would love how I can improve this guide's teach-ability!

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  • Maybe a poem.
  • +Rep. Just asking, I can +Rep you multiple times right? XD

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Have i read your guide? yes the author clearly did (i have also).
Have you run your guide through a spell check? YES. i edited the guide from top to bottom.
Why do i want you to review it? its a great guide but got pushed aside because the author is not a native english speaker so i am working with the author to get it some love.

thanks jhoi :)


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SR ADC Vayne
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DATE
01/01/14


DoomGlad's ADC Vayne Guide Review
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jhoijhoi wrote:
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SR ADC Vayne
RATING
7/10
DATE
01/01/14


DoomGlad's ADC Vayne Guide Review



Lol I just got shut down from the god. GG my dream xD. Sorry my guide wasn't up to your standards ;(

On some side notes, what graphic visuals would you want and what do you mean by wrong columns in pros and cons section? (I suck at columns).
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Name: IPodPulse
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/xlthunderzlxs-terrifying-tryndamere-preseason-update-306965
I did read your guide on how to make a guide, also your guide on BBcode.
I have run a spellcheck on my guide, and I'm sure I got at least all the spelling correct.
If you found me helpful give me some +Rep :)
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Did you read my Guide to Making a Guide just now? Yes C:
Have you run your guide through a spell check? Yes.



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