Haven’t seen Aftershock, Prototype: Omnistone or Arcane Comet used on pantheon that much according to stat sites, are they really worth taking over the other options like conq? Might actually be good to explain more in depth in the notes about these pages since they seem rather off-meta in my opinion.

I don’t think it’s as useful anymore to include summoner spells for jungle & support as Pantheon is no longer as strong in those lanes as he is in say mid & toplane. You could put in some notes about TP and maybe explain why you should be going for it instead of say Ignite. Is it good for plays, getting back to lane to catch CS, split pushing, helping your team across the map and so forth. There must be other uses for Exhaust other than just to pick against illaoi & morde right? I feel like it’s quite a useless spell to use on pantheon if it only really has 2 specific situations where it might be good, TP or Ignite just feels better, if the struggle is that those matchups are difficult then it’s better to just roam around the map with Teleport & Grand Starfall, get your other teammates ahead instead.

In your notes about Corrupting Potion you only mention that they’re the general starter, why? How come this start is good for panth, why is it more commonly used than say Long Sword & Refillable Potion or Doran's Shield?

I think maybe you could improve on your notes in general, since some are a bit lackluster and don't really explain as much about the builds/items, only that they’re either the most common or what boots to run, but not why they’re picked.

In your situational items section you’ve explained pretty decently about the items, but I haven’t seen an explanation of Death's Dance, Serpent's Fang, Chempunk Chainsword and The Collector. Most people tend to look at the cheat sheet to find quick information before a game starts etc. so having just a bit of information about why each item is built will go a very long way.

Because of the recent changes I don’t think the jungle & support builds are that viable anymore so it might be better to just remove them.

I see that you’re using Q>E>W max as your ability order but there is also the Q>W>E order, what do you think of it? Is it good or not and if so, where can it be used and when is Q>E>W better?

Some of your threats descriptions are great, but most are just missing a description completely so it’s confusing on what to do during that matchup. Also haven’t seen you explain any of the synergies or why they have good synergy with Pantheon.




Overall presentation of the guide is a good start. Some sections have very well done code and some could maybe get fixed ever so slightly.

You could center the video at the top as well explaining pantheon’s gameplay.

Might be a good idea to take the image of pantheon’s stats and center it using center tags. basically like this:



It’ll look a lot cleaner if you look over your guide for every instance where a [*] is used and makes that section into a list rather than just having those ugly things there if they’re not going to be used. For example:



Introduction

I honestly personally dislike vocabularies explaining stuff like health or CC etc. since most of it is already common sense for 95% of players.


Playstyle

Don’t have many things to say about this section, apart from the aforementioned lists, I think this section is good.

Abilities

Might be better here to also explain what each ability is good for, rather than just only the tooltips. For example, Grand Starfall is great for roaming around the map, say mid per say.


Abilities / Sequence

You talked a bit about why Conqueror and the major runes are good, which is a good start. I do think you should also talk about why your minor runes like Domination & Inspiration are good on pantheon. Also haven’t seen you talk about any of the other keystones like Aftershock, Press the Attack, Arcane Comet or Prototype: Omnistone? You mention a little bit about the other 2 trees but I feel like it’s way too little, it doesn’t give much reasons to pick those rune pages over conqueror.

I do like the small descriptions explaining the key items depending on the rune page though, maybe you could further elaborate on them?


Itemization

You talk about Divine Sunderer being the new anti-tank item but you don’t have it present anywhere in your cheat sheet at the top, you also haven’t explained the other mythic items at all like Goredrinker, Iceborn Gauntlet & Prowler's Claw.

Titanic Hydra & Youmuu's Ghostblade isn’t explained anywhere in your cheat sheet either but both items are either essential or good?

You also haven’t explained anything about Serpent's Fang, The Collector, Blade of the Ruined King and most of the stuff in your jungle & supp builds, these items all being present in your cheat sheet at the top of the guide.

No descriptions for potential boots on Pantheon like Plated Steelcaps or Mercury's Treads?


Final Chapters

The 3 final sections are okay, but the first 2 could again be improved with a list. I also don’t think the text explains that much about how to do the combo, I think it’d be better to either include a description under each combo explaining how to do them or even better, include a video showcasing the combo / tips & tricks.

The Buffs & Nerfs section seems unneeded but that’s just me though.