jhoijhoi's review & discussion service

[quote=wRAthoFVuLK][quote=kin333x] Probly the worst thing i have ever written... It was fun but painful Beware me cause seisures Guide For (champion): Nasus Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: BECAUSE ITS PRO What I'd like you to focus on: THE PRONESS Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/pro-nasus-guide-109600]PRO NASUS GUIDE[/url] [/quote] not funny...don't request a review, which takes up jhoi's time, for something not serious like this...[/quote]

[quote=kin333x]It was not supposed to be funny, well it was but... It was supposed to be fun to read so she would have a laugh, like a break... i know it would be a waste but... she reveiws so many and, i just wanted her to have a bit of fun reading one... so when you say not funny it was not supposed to BE funny![/quote]

[quote=th3BlackAngel]jhoi, heres a thought, in your veredicts post have a section for general guides( like for B-Wongs general carry guide, or searz rune guide) which aren't particular to any champion.[/quote]

[quote=PsiGuard]Hey jhoi it's me again. I just finished my first draft of a Nocturne guide and was hoping you could give it a look before I publish. [color=#0080ff]Summoner Level:[/color] 30 [color=#0080ff]Post count:[/color] 242 (at time of this edit) [color=#0080ff]Spelling and Grammar check completed:[/color] Yes, but let me know if you notice anything I missed. [color=#0080ff]Guide for:[/color] [[Nocturne]] [color=#0080ff]Why I'd like this guide to be reviewed:[/color] I really appreciated the thoroughness of your review of my Alistar guide and I want your opinion before I publish, if possible. [color=#0080ff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] Your usual wealth of advice and criticism. Also a basic proofread as this one's a little more fresh than the last. You don't have to watch the videos if you don't want (I have quite a few). [color=#0080ff]Guide Link:[/color] http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/haunting-the-jungle-nightmare-style-109358 P.S. (In case you ask) I included a lot of videos because: 1. Stonewall and TheOddOne have more credibility than me. 2. They explain their concepts as well as I could. 3. It's easier to learn jungling by watching it, rather than reading a lot of text. I look forward to hearing from you.[/quote]

[quote=wRAthoFVuLK]^page not found...did you publish it?[/quote]

[quote=PsiGuard]XD no. Hang on.... EDIT: Okay, should work now.[/quote]

[quote=wRAthoFVuLK]there ya go :) what happened that it wasn't working before?[/quote]

[quote=PsiGuard]I didn't publish it. I wanted feedback before I released it this time. Didn't realize the link wouldn't work until I published ^^[/quote]

[quote=ShadowReign757]Guide For: Rumble Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Some criticism and rune help What I'd like you to focus on: Anything Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/rumble-only-cute-on-the-outside-103558[/quote]

[quote=Kesu]Guide For (champion): Vladimir Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide, I would like some constructive criticism What I'd like you to focus on: The clarity in my language, and whether or not it's both noob and pro friendly. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/vladimir-the-universal-recipient-109137[/quote]