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kin333x wrote:

Probly the worst thing i have ever written... It was fun but painful
Beware me cause seisures


Guide For (champion): Nasus
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: BECAUSE ITS PRO
What I'd like you to focus on: THE PRONESS
Guide Link: PRO NASUS GUIDE


not funny...don't request a review, which takes up jhoi's time, for something not serious like this...
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It was not supposed to be funny, well it was but... It was supposed to be fun to read so she would have a laugh, like a break... i know it would be a waste but... she reveiws so many and, i just wanted her to have a bit of fun reading one... so when you say not funny it was not supposed to BE funny!
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jhoi, heres a thought, in your veredicts post have a section for general guides( like for B-Wongs general carry guide, or searz rune guide) which aren't particular to any champion.
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Hey jhoi it's me again. I just finished my first draft of a Nocturne guide and was hoping you could give it a look before I publish.

Summoner Level: 30

Post count: 242 (at time of this edit)

Spelling and Grammar check completed: Yes, but let me know if you notice anything I missed.

Guide for: Nocturne

Why I'd like this guide to be reviewed: I really appreciated the thoroughness of your review of my Alistar guide and I want your opinion before I publish, if possible.

What I'd like you to focus on: Your usual wealth of advice and criticism. Also a basic proofread as this one's a little more fresh than the last. You don't have to watch the videos if you don't want (I have quite a few).

Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/haunting-the-jungle-nightmare-style-109358

P.S. (In case you ask) I included a lot of videos because:
1. Stonewall and TheOddOne have more credibility than me.
2. They explain their concepts as well as I could.
3. It's easier to learn jungling by watching it, rather than reading a lot of text.

I look forward to hearing from you.
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^page not found...did you publish it?

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XD no. Hang on....

EDIT: Okay, should work now.
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there ya go :)

what happened that it wasn't working before?

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I didn't publish it. I wanted feedback before I released it this time. Didn't realize the link wouldn't work until I published ^^
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Guide For: Rumble
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Some criticism and rune help
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/rumble-only-cute-on-the-outside-103558

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Guide For (champion): Vladimir
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide, I would like some constructive criticism
What I'd like you to focus on: The clarity in my language, and whether or not it's both noob and pro friendly.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/vladimir-the-universal-recipient-109137

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