MOBAVERSE Library

[quote=Xeronn][quote=RosePhoenix] o_o didn't know we had such a thread lol Anyways I'd like it if I could get some reviews on my Riven guide. Link's in my sig Thanks <3 [/quote] [Spoiler] My first review was completely out of context (a surprised cat followed by an upvote) [color=#ff8000][b]Cheatsheet[/b][/color] - It's not always possible to start with 4 [[Health Potion]], I'd think it better to have mentioned as an optional thing if it can be done without wasting time. - I don't see the benefit of 1 point into [[Butcher]] unless you have a hard time last-hitting. 4 points into [[Sorcery]] is hardly going to help if you aren't investing in any CDR items. I would personally take them out and invest into more AD ([[Deadliness]]) and another point into [[Hardiness]] / [[Resistance]]. [color=#ff8000][b]Lane Matchups[/b][/color] - I just like reading what other people say about [[Gangplank]]. [color=#008000][b]Conclusion[/b][/color] Everything else is explained brilliantly, and this guide is worthy of people's attention. ^^ ~Xeronn [/Spoiler][/quote]

[quote=astrolia]I've finally finished a second draft of my revised [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/support-sona-tl-dr-130139]support Sona guide[/url]. Would appreciate a new set of eyes to look over things.[/quote]

[quote=Xenotechie]Well, technically, I have 2 pairs of eyes... [spoiler] Well, new set of eyes reporting for duty. Have a small list of my gripes: [list] [*] [[Clairvoyance]] is not that good on [[Sona]], but not for the reasons you mention here. No amount of knowledge of movement patterns or enemy mentality can substitute for the sheer utility [[Clairvoyance]] provides. It is very useful when an enemy champion breaks line of sight in a bush in order to avoid an ability or a stun. Clairvoyance fixes that. It also messes up juking, acts as a makeshift ward for overextended teammates, tracks a jungler's movements and is generally an awesome spell. The problem [[Sona]] has with it is that she lack any hard CC unlike, say, [[Taric]], or the epic slow [[Nunu]] has, so she needs to compensate. [*] You should consider adding a poke-oriented rune and/or mastery build, you know, with magic penetration and all that stuff. [*] Matchups are pretty nice, to be honest, but not detailed. Then again, this is supposed to be a tl;dr guide, so it's probably intended. [*] OK, I really like that respawn map. Mind if I use it in my own guide? [/list] All in all, great guide, [color=#00ff00]+1[/color]. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Syther Blade]umm dude before me didnt post a guide so i guess i wont review... [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/syther-blades-guide-to-ad-and-ap-ezreal-234636]Your text to link here...[/url] my AD/AP [[Ezreal]] Guide[/quote]

[quote=Berzerk][spoiler]Good start. I do see room for improvement/little things to make it better. 1.) Put triforce on AD cheat sheet. On the cheat sheet you want to put what the player should be building in a majority of there games. On Ezreal you will want a triforce most of the time for its damage and utility. IE is a good item but it is more situational. 2.) NEVER NEVER NEVER RUSH LICHBANE. I cannot stress this enough. Lichbane before at least ~200 AP is a waste of gold and is gimping yourself and your team.  3.) I feel matchups sections would be very good and could help your guide rise up. Overall the guide is a decent start so I +1   -Berzerk [/spoiler] As for my guide, check out my jayce guide which can be found [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-comprehensive-guide-to-jayce-top-232899]Here.[/url][/quote]

[quote=Xeronn][quote=astrolia] I've finally finished a second draft of my revised [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/support-sona-tl-dr-130139]support Sona guide[/url]. Would appreciate a new set of eyes to look over things. [/quote] [Spoiler] Well, finding what I can to help with from what I know, this is what I think: [list] [*] I prefer [[Greater Glyph of Shielding]] personally. AP damage isn't a problem early game, the majority of it should only come from the AD carry. They are the same as [[Greater Glyph of Warding]] by level 9 anyway. [*] A video or two maybe? Warding image would be nice too. [/list] That is honestly all I have to say, everything else you've done I am very pleased with. Sorry if you were hoping for more. This is a really good guide. [color=#00ff00]Upvoted[/color] ~Xeronn [/Spoiler] @Berzerk, plz also make sure to quote the post of the author of the guide[/quote]

[quote=Xeronn][quote=Syther Blade] umm dude before me didnt post a guide so i guess i wont review... [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/syther-blades-guide-to-ad-and-ap-ezreal-234636]Your text to link here...[/url] my AD/AP [[Ezreal]] Guide [/quote] [Spoiler] [color=#ff8000][b]Items[/b][/color] - Not gonna comment on [[Trinity Force]] since it's such a debatable item. - For your AP build, getting [[Rabadon's Deathcap]] straight away is much better than buying a second [[Blasting Wand]]. It only delays the massive boost that you will get once you buy it. [color=#ff8000][b]Skill Sequence[/b][/color] - Your AP build on cheatsheet shows maxing out [[Essence Flux]] first, but in the chapter, it shows [[Arcane Shift]] being maxed first. o.o? [color=#ff8000][b]Masteries[/b][/color] - [b]AD[/b] - A 21/9/0 setup is much more effective, as it will boost your survivability a little bit with the extra health. 1 point [[Resistance]], 3 points [[Hardiness]], 4 points [[Durabaility]], 1 point [[Veteran's Scars]] [color=#ff8000][b]Laning Phase[/b][/color] - If you don't want to bore people with walls of text, try to format it so you have key points, and bold important parts of it. Make a list maybe, as long as it can make people want to read it. - [b]Mid/Late Game[/b] sounds better imo, since most things are ordered left > right generally. - [b](Support Combo's should be Support Combos, don't need the ')[/b] [color=#ff8000][b]Team Fights[/b][/color] - Separating it into into AD and AP for small things like, using [[Essence Flux]] for damage, or to increase allie's attack speed. Using [[Trueshot Barrage]] at the start of a fight for the extra attack speed, waiting until the enemy is grouped, or the end of a fight to pick off targets. [color=#ff8000][b]Support Combos[/b][/color] - [[Nunu]] is also a notable support with [[Ezreal now]]. [[Taric]] is better than [[Janna imo]], but it depends on skill. Make some notes on why those supports are so great, and a little bit on the other ones too. - [b](Combo's should be Combos, don't need the ')[/b] [color=#0080ff][b]Other improvements[/b][/color] - [b]Bot Lane Match-ups[/b] - From experience you should know how to handle particular combos, you can mention strengths/weaknesses, and key points. - [b]Farming[/b] - For AP and AD, talk about the optimal way to get cs, and when you should be farming, or helping the team. Could mention [[Mystic Shot]] and [[Trueshot Barrage]] clearing in it too. Good guide, I hope my review helps you to make it even better. [color=#00ff00]Upvoted[/color] ~Xeronn [/Spoiler][/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]Guys... I hope you all aren't letting Xeronn do all the work. If you post something here that you want reviewed, you MUST review something posted here by someone else. It's not fair if you're just posting here to get your stuff checked out and don't try and help others. That's the point of this thread, to get a community of people who help each other, instead of just trying to help themselves. Just because "the guy before me didn't post a link" doesn't mean you shouldn't LOOK for something to review a few posts/pages back. It's all about sharing and caring. Don't take advantage of people who are only trying to help you, make sure you give something back. And as Xeronn said, ensure you quote the guide you are reviewing. Listing a review in here randomly doesn't help anyone because who knows which guide you've reviewed? D: Keep on keeping on guys :) Proud of those who have been following the rules and helping peeps out, I'm going to +rep everyone who has completed a review in this thread correctly as incentive to do things "the right way". SO LET ME REITERATE THE RULES: [color=#ff8000]1)[/color] When requesting a review, include the link. The easiest rule of them all, but it hasn't been followed. If you're too lazy to include a link in your post, why should we bother reviewing your work? Additionally, having a link in the post means that reviews are linked. If Xeronn posts a review for my guide, but I haven't supplied a link for him to quote, how can anyone else look at the guide? [color=#ff8000]2)[/color] Quote the request in your post. This is so people know what guide you have reviewed, and as above, can look at the guide from your review via the link you've quoted. [color=#ff8000]3)[/color] Spoiler your review and ensure you post both here AND on the guide itself.[/quote]

[quote=Xeronn]<3 u jhoi[/quote]

[quote=Joxuu]Syther Blade's Ezreal guide > [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/syther-blades-guide-to-ad-and-ap-ezreal-234636]ME[/url] < [spoiler=Review] Hello. Here is the review for MOBAVERSE. My points; - 2x Blasting Wand only delays your items. Is it meant to be like that or did u missclick twice ? - You could explain differences of AP and AD more, maybe mention pro's and con's :P ? - At defensive items, you mention Thornmail, trust me, it's not an item you want to get for Ezreal. - I'd say mentioning Exhaust is worth of it in optional summoner spells. - You could mention few situational runes maybe :3 - Support combo's, you could mention other vialable supports, like Blitzcrank maybe, because I'd say his better than Jarvan IV. The review may seem harsh, but It's just my opinion. This guide is really good and the review only mentions con's, not pro's, because they wouldn't fit in this box :3 Really well done, +1[/spoiler][/quote]