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[quote=Anastasios]REVIEW POWERS ACTIVATE i) Joxuu: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-sentinous-but-short-guide-of-xin-zhao-233357]A Sentinous But Short Guide Of Xin Zhao[/url] [spoiler] Short but detailed, I like the layout, especially the spoilered explanations. Unfortunately I don't play Xin or AD bruisers in general, but your choices considering runes, masteries, and items make sense. Except [[honor guard]], i honestly think you will benefit more from [[vigor]]. [color=#008000]+1[/color] [/spoiler] ii)Slaydis: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fiddlesticks-the-master-of-crows-a-mean-in-depth-guide-234139]Fiddlesticks, The Master Of Crows (A Mean In-Depth Guide)[/url] [spoiler] First, i noticed that you must work on the layout a little bit, it gets a bit wall-of-text-y here and there, and the masteries chapter is a bit messy, plus a couple of spoilers for the game stats chapter would help. Now on to more technical stuff: -[[void staff]]. Your logic is flawed there. Let's say you get Void Staff against someone with [u]80 MRes[/u] (30 base and a [[banshee's veil]]). Your passive reduces their MRes by 10: 70 MRes. Sorc Shoes+Marks=28,55 MPen, meaning effectively 41,45 MRes. Void staff penetrated 40% of that, which is 16,58, leading to a total effective MRes of [u]24,87[/u]. If you had Abyssal instead, their effective MRes would be [u]21,45[/u]. Abyssal is almost always better than Void on Fiddle, unless if the enemy team is packed with tanks. It also gives him MRes, which helps a lot, as he is always in the middle of the fight with [[crowstorm]]. In the 2 years that i am playing LoL, i can honestly recall playing Lanesticks 3 times, so i can't really judge if that skill sequence works. For junglesticks though, i like to get 2 points in [[drain]] just to keep me sustained, and then max [[terrify]] right away. This way your ganks become more dangerous, but you have to rely on damage from the lane. I like the map for crowstorming though. For masteries, consider investing in [[butcher]] instead of [[brute force]], since you won't harass with your autoattacks a whole lot. I'm more of a 21-0-9 guy, but it's just personal. Also, i suggest you add some more viable stuff, like e.g. a 9/9/12 mastery setup, or more runes. I also disagree with how you say to use [[crowstorm]] in lane. Any enemy with half a brain will know instantly when you are going to ult. Overall, it's decent, but it can be much better. [color=#808080]No vote for now.[/color] [/spoiler] iii) Berzerk: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-comprehensive-guide-to-jayce-top-232899]The Comprehensive Guide To Jayce Top[/url] [spoiler] First off, i want to say that i don't know how to play Jayce. But this guide [i]taught[/i] me that. I like the layout, i like the videos, i like your explanations. Now on to the meh parts :D -Lifesteal Quints... I don't know. I think MS would fit him more, but if you think he really needs the sustain, i guess they are fine. -Add when you can do what with Jayce. When can you top, when can you bot, when can you jungle? -Maybe a couple of words more for boots? [color=#008000]+1[/color] [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Xeronn]jhoi has influencing powers on these people @.@ [b]@Joxuu[/b] Not gonna be mean about it, but this was just posted by jhoi. You need to quote the post that the author made, followed by your review [b]Spoilered[/b]. EDIT: Looks like you got the spoiler done part way into my post lol.[/quote]

[quote=Anastasios]Nah Xeronn, i wanted to do some more reviews anyway. We need some kind of list for all the guides available for review though, it can get somewhat confusing to search for guides like this. And imagine if we have like 20 pages, someone would have to search through all of them, meaning that the later they were posted, the more reviews they would get. But since the randomise code doesn't work, what if we use some external program linked in the first post (like a java programm or something), that randomly displays a guide each time to be reviewed?[/quote]

[quote=Xeronn][quote=Berzerk] As for my guide, check out my jayce guide which can be found [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-comprehensive-guide-to-jayce-top-232899]Here.[/url] [/quote] [Spoiler] [color=#ff8000][b]Items[/b][/color] - [b]SoloQ[/b] - I don't understand the reasoning behind buying [[Madred's Bloodrazor]]. It would be much better to get an extra defensive item, like a [[Banshee's Veil]], seeing as you have [[Ninja Tabi]]. - [b]Tanky[/b] - It would be better to have [[Mercury's Treads]] if you are going to be getting into the thick of the fight, so you aren't wrecked by CC. - [b]Poke[/b] - Clearly designed for poke, yet you include [[Berserker's Greaves]] as your only attack speed item, which won't help at all considering the amount given is pointless without other items. [color=#ff8000][b]Runes[/b][/color] - [b]SoloQ[/b] - [[Greater Quintessence of Strength]] will give you a stronger early game than [[Greater Quintessence of Vampirism]], - [b]All[/b] - [[Greater Glyph of Shielding]] is much better than [[Greater Glpyh of Warding]] right now, since AP damage is not an issue until later levels. The MR amount is the same by level 9. [color=#ff8000][b]Summoner Spells[/b][/color] - [b]AD Carry[/b] - [[Heal]] is the primary spell to get unless you have a [[Soraka]]/[[Taric]], likewise if you are fighting them. [color=#0080ff][b]Other Improvements[/b][/color] - You could also talk about farming, and your role in team-fights for each build - [b]Big Items[/b] chapter is a bit unorganized, you could divide it up into sections. Also add the names of the items above for quick reference. Needs to be spaced out a little too. - Expand on the number of matchups when you get around to it. Good guide overall, I hope my review helped, and improve keep working on your guide when you get the time ^^ [color=#00ff00]Upvoted[/color] ~Xeronn [/Spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Xeronn][quote=Anastasios] Nah Xeronn, i wanted to do some more reviews anyway. We need some kind of list for all the guides available for review though, it can get somewhat confusing to search for guides like this. And imagine if we have like 20 pages, someone would have to search through all of them, meaning that the later they were posted, the more reviews they would get. But since the randomise code doesn't work, what if we use some external program linked in the first post (like a java programm or something), that randomly displays a guide each time to be reviewed? [/quote] I see, np np. Well, if jhoi keeps an eye on this thread on a fairly regular basis, she could link all of the guides into a spoiler in the OP, then add them as more come in. Also sort alphabetically by champion name so you don't get one long list. (E.g: A-L, M-R, S-Z)[/quote]

[quote=Anastasios][quote][/quote]REVIEW POWERS CONTINUE ACTIVATING iv) astrolia: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/support-sona-tl-dr-130139]Support Sona tl;dr[/url] [spoiler] I couldn't really find something wrong. Only 2 things: Maybe prefer MRes/lvl blues, since the bot lane won't really have much magic damage, and add why not max Q earlier, since it gives your AD carry more damage to work with. [color=#008000]++1[/color] [/spoiler] v) Syther Blade: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/syther-blades-guide-to-ad-and-ap-ezreal-234636]Syther Blade's Guide to AD and AP Ezreal[/url] [spoiler] It could maybe get a better format. Walls of text here and there, and a few errors too. 21/9/0 is better for AD Ez, [[veteran's scars]] can help a lot. As for AP ez, 3 points in [[brute force]] and the rest in [[mental force]], [[butcher]] or [[havoc]] are better. [[demolitionist]] is just bad. Maybe just get a [[vampiric scepter]] and leave the whole bloodthirster for after triforce? More as and crit chance for your [[infinity edge]]. No mention of [[archangel's staff]] or [[rod of ages]] for AP ez? In your combos, you don't mention [[deathfire grasp]], and you should really add more q's inbetween. [color=#008000]+1[/color] [/spoiler] vi) RosePhoenix: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/reverent-riven-an-in-depth-riven-guide-by-rosephoenix-211204]Reverent Riven, an In-Depth Riven Guide by RosePhoenix[/url] [spoiler] Honestly... i couldn't find anything wrong. I do have some concerns about the second bloodthirster, but i don't really know how to play [[riven]], so i will trust you on that one. [color=#008000]++1[/color] [/spoiler] REVIEW POWERS SHUTTING DOWN [quote=xeronn] Well, if jhoi keeps an eye on this thread on a fairly regular basis, she could link all of the guides into a spoiler in the OP, then add them as more come in. Also sort alphabetically by champion name so you don't get one long list. (E.g: A-L, M-R, S-Z) [/quote] that could work too.[/quote]

[quote=Xeronn]On another note, my reviews are like "o.O so much text"[/quote]

[quote=Anastasios][quote=Xeronn] On another note, my reviews are like "o.O so much text" [/quote] Because you put effort on them :D[/quote]

[quote=OTGBionicArm][quote=Syther Blade] umm dude before me didnt post a guide so i guess i wont review... [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/syther-blades-guide-to-ad-and-ap-ezreal-234636]Your text to link here...[/url] my AD/AP [[Ezreal]] Guide [/quote] [spoiler=Read me] I've already commented on your guide stating I prefered trinity force over [[Phantom dancer]]. Otherwise the guide is well put together and very informative. I love that you explain everything for both AD and AP [[Ezreal]]. I believe that having that level of dedication to both his roles is good, but a suggestion, WHERE'S JUNGLE EZ? :3 You have my plus 1 and plus rep. :D [/spoiler] As for my [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/mage-varus-complete-guide-to-spreading-corruption-239027]Varus guide,[/url] I'd like it not to be judged based on how other Varus guides are. Mine is a different breed and is unique. it should be judged as a mage guide, not an AD carry or hybrid. Thank you all. :3 Note; my matchups are not finished, only [[Ahri]] is there, I just wanted people to see the layout of them.[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi][quote=xeronn]jhoi has influencing powers on these people @.@[/quote] What? :P [quote=Anastasios]And imagine if we have like 20 pages, someone would have to search through all of them, meaning that the later they were posted, the more reviews they would get.But since the randomise code doesn't work, what if we use some external program linked in the first post (like a java programm or something), that randomly displays a guide each time to be reviewed?[/quote] I'm not sure how I'm going to address this. Mainly because any sort of request filing is going to go poorly. Ordering alphabetically? People in the middle won't get looked at. Ordering by champion? Slightly better, but people may avoid champions then don't know anything about: most people asking for a review just want to share their work, and are happy to have ANYONE read it and give their opinion on it. Ordering 1st posted to last (or vice versa)? Same problem as ordering alphabetically. The only way I can see it "working" is to keep ensuring when you review to include the link to the guide so people can review that way. In addition to that, people can always request a rereview a week later ONCE they have updated the guide due to prior feedback.[/quote]