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Welcome!


I will review your guides!

But I will start with some things about me, as a player, as a writer.
My name is Jolien, I live in Europe (Netherlands), but play on the US servers. (NA) My current ELO is 1150, but I dont really play that much Ranked, I do have 900+ wins. I also watch a lot of streams and that way my knowlage is better then my gameplay. I main Mid and Support, Favourite champions are Janna, Teemo and Orianna. I have played almost all champions.

Things I checkout when reviewing:
  • Layout, pictures, etc.
  • Build itself, is it actually serious and good.
  • Extra information (how to farm, spellcominations, more then a plain build)
  • Enjoyment to read through it.

What do you GET for a review?
A review comment on your guide. A +1 vote when I think its good. I will never downvote.

What do I ask?
Nothing! Only a +rep if the review helped you out.

I might think of more things when Im reviewing, but that is the main.

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Orianna The Full Metal Lady - Teemo - Super Teemo - Akali - The Balance of Full AP




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I guess I am the first.
Server: EU West
Champion: Skarner
Why did you make this?: If you refer to this request, I am doing it cause it is hard to get observed when doing a guide for an older champion.
Something I need to know?: Well since you say that you watch streams there is nothing special

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Well, I can always use a good review :)


Server: EUW
Champion/sort guide: Lux, AP Carry mid
Why did you make this? At the time there was no good Lux guide, and I just love Lux so much :D
Something I need to know? Not really... can't think of anything :P


Hint: how about asking people to include a link to their guide? xD


EDIT: Hey, I'm being listened to :D Link to my guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/luxurious-lasergaming-113843

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ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

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Too hot to be icecream.

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He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

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Server:EUNE
Champion/sort guide: Malzahar/AP mid
Why did you make this? Because i love to play Malzahar.
Something I need to know? Not really.
Link to the guide: Here.

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KSS Awake wrote:

I guess I am the first.
Server: EU West
Champion: Skarner
Why did you make this?: If you refer to this request, I am doing it cause it is hard to get observed when doing a guide for an older champion.
Something I need to know?: Well since you say that you watch streams there is nothing special

Build:
Basic, but very solid build for Skarner. Good build though. He needs the tanky-ness to go in the team and drag someone down. Love how you have 3 different options, to fit your playstyle. I do think maybe Trinity Force is not a real support item. Maybe it's better to replace that with something like a randuins. Just my opinion. Build is good.

Layout
Sweet layout! It looks you put a lot of time in it. One thing to mention, the Skarner pictures you use on every start are pretty big. ATM I am on a really slow ****py computer, which makes it hard to scroll through. Also you got a lot of different chapters and some are very short. Then have a picture for every shor chapter makes the guide quite big, BUT it makes it organised though. One thing too: pros and cons are both yellow, maybe make em green and red :)?? Just an idea. Overall, LOVE <3<3 the layout. Good job!

Extra information
You got so much information on skarner, it's really nice! On every single thing on jungling. Theres nothing more to say about it. Good job!

Enjoyment to read
Like I said, my computer is not helping to read this guide through, since it's so damn slow. But due to all the pictures and chapters it's really enjoyable. You know what you're reading and scroll through the guide looking to read for something.

Overal
I must admit, I don't OWN skarner, but have played him when he was free for some times. I also saw him being played on streams as well. You explain the ways of jungling on him too. I do know how to jungle and you explain it nicely. You actually convinced me to buy skarner. I do needed another new jungler :).

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IceCreamy wrote:

Well, I can always use a good review :)


Server: EUW
Champion/sort guide: Lux, AP Carry mid
Why did you make this? At the time there was no good Lux guide, and I just love Lux so much :D
Something I need to know? Not really... can't think of anything :P


Hint: how about asking people to include a link to their guide? xD


EDIT: Hey, I'm being listened to :D Link to my guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/luxurious-lasergaming-113843
I forgot x_x... Just when I realised I saw your post too. So thanks :). Since I got so much spare time, I did your review too :D

Build:
Solid build. I play Lux myself. Things I build different are that I am not sure what to start with. Kage's lucky pick is good to start with and Chalice of Harmony too, but one thing Lux doesnt receive with that is HP/sustain. She is very squishy and if you get caught you die easily. My reasion to mostly go double dorans. But Im still not sure, I might try. Also Deathfire Grasp is an item not used by me. Reason being that she has very high range on all her spells. Late game you don't want to get too close to use DFG. Might be just me, but those are my thoughts. Solid build though, and I do understand your item choices, my playstyle just doesn't fit with some. You might want to add some more builds so people can choose their preferable playstyle (support/sustain)

Layout
Good layout. Very enjoyable to scoll through. Just love the laser chapter pictures<3. Good use of the BBcodes. I might have seen one or two "walls of text" but they are not annoying. Love the layout.

Extra information
Plenty of information about Lux. You actually convinsed me on some points. Like I read through the guide and think: hm, thats true, that might work better. As for items and such too. Also the basic gameplay information of Lux, like Q, E, R.

Enjoyment to read
Just love to read this guide, also since Lux was my main for a very very long time. I enjoy the information and pictures.

Overal
I mentioned before, I did main Lux when I wasn't as experienced as I am now. I should play her more, just got stuck on the build. I think this build might help me out of it. Im adding this to my favorites, and when I can play Ill try her out again :D.

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Orianna The Full Metal Lady - Teemo - Super Teemo - Akali - The Balance of Full AP




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Well imo Lux doesn't need sustain because of her high range.
About Deathfire Grasp: I wrote in the item section that it's a good item because her AA range (for passive) is 550 and Ignite is 650 while Deathfire Grasp is 750, so it's fine on that behalf. It just deals a lot of damage, gives some mana regen and AP.

Thanks a lot for the review, +rep given :)

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Anastasios wrote:

Server:EUNE
Champion/sort guide: Malzahar/AP mid
Why did you make this? Because i love to play Malzahar.
Something I need to know? Not really.
Link to the guide: Here.

Build:
To be honest, I haven't played Malzahar that much, but I do know much about AP carry builds. A few things Im noticing:
Why take Banshee's Veil as a main item in your build. Sure it's a good item, but I do think it's only good if they have a high poke team. Better items to replace it with are things like Zhonya's Hourglass], [[Deathfire Grasp or Guardian Angel. The first two suggestions also add up to your AP.
Then second, you start off with straignt Hextech Revolver? I personally prefer going double dorans if you go that route first. They are cheap and grand you HP, mana regen and AP. Perfect sustain item.
Apart from that I agree on the build.

Layout
I have nothing to complain about the layout :). I just love to see a perfect balance in pictures, bbcodes and text.

Extra information
You got plenty of information! Details on how to kill, how to farm. Everything you need to know on Malzahar.

Enjoyment to read
I enjoy to read this guide since it grands good information, has a nice layout, so you know what youre reading and you can look up the stuff you want to read.

Overal
Since I dont own Malzahar and only played him a few times I cant really review this to the fullest, but I tried my best. The guide on itself is good. Like I said, my questions on the build are based on my experience as a mid-laner. Overal I would read this if I was wanting to play Malzahar, and I will add this to my favs in case I will buy him or when it's a free week.

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@Icecreamy
I agree. I didnt really know the range on everything. I will tryout your build. Im excited to try it :)

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IceCreamy wrote:

Well imo Lux doesn't need sustain because of her high range.
About Deathfire Grasp: I wrote in the item section that it's a good item because her AA range (for passive) is 550 and Ignite is 650 while Deathfire Grasp is 750, so it's fine on that behalf. It just deals a lot of damage, gives some mana regen and AP.

EWWWWWW DFGGGGG!!!!!

Also it doesn't give mana regen any more mr. smarty ice cream.
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^ Goddammit, it used to. But it doesn't matter really since Chalice > AUG gives plenty :P

I'll stop derailing this thread now xD

Serious question: Do you take more reviews at once from the same person?

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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