Rudmed's Twisted Fate Guide
Verdict: A good Attack Speed Twisted Fate Guide
Possible Improvements: Screenshots of the guide/build working, some images... not much needs improving, as this guide is pretty much complete and very good for what the author is trying to achieve
Constructive Criticism:
1) No level of
Wild Cards? At all? Not even at level 3? D: It's such a great harassing and pushing tool.
2) The only problem I have with your item choices is that you have no life steal. Sure you have huge attack speed and damage, but where's your survivability? Frozen Mallet only provides health, and it's ineffective to use Youmuu's Ghostblade's active to run away.
3) No Flash?
4) Your introduction is cute ^^ But I believe the "Recent Scores" bit is not so great. No screenshots = no believability. I could say in my Ashe guide, "Recent Scores: 21/2/15 with 12 buildings". Would you believe it? :P
5) "Build Changes" should be moved to the end of the guide - you're delaying us from reading what we want to read :D
6) Your guide needs some colour. Even simple red/green for cons/pros would be nice.
7) In your "Runes" section, you should show the reader which runes you currently get, and then the others as "Alternative Runes".
8) In your "Items" section, you didn't mention using Sword of the Divine's active on towers. The only problem I have with you item build is that you have two Unique Actives that you have to remember to activate. Might get a bit fiddly.
9) Your "Situational Items" section is very neat and very informative. I like it. Makes me want to redo mine to reduce it to simplicity like yours.
10) You never explain your passive.
11) Great section! ("Using your skills")
12) ^^ It's clear you haven't read over your Summoner Spells in a long time (Heal: You have lifesteal). I'd also suggest removing the "Bad Options" section. Is it necessary?
14) You just noticed there was no 13)
15) Your Priority list is a bit off-kilter. Why suggest targeting Singed of all people? Or Dr. Mundo? D:
Verdict: A good Attack Speed Twisted Fate Guide
Possible Improvements: Screenshots of the guide/build working, some images... not much needs improving, as this guide is pretty much complete and very good for what the author is trying to achieve
Constructive Criticism:
1) No level of
Wild Cards? At all? Not even at level 3? D: It's such a great harassing and pushing tool.2) The only problem I have with your item choices is that you have no life steal. Sure you have huge attack speed and damage, but where's your survivability?
Frozen Mallet only provides health, and it's ineffective to use Youmuu's Ghostblade's active to run away.3) No
Flash?4) Your introduction is cute ^^ But I believe the "Recent Scores" bit is not so great. No screenshots = no believability. I could say in my Ashe guide, "Recent Scores: 21/2/15 with 12 buildings". Would you believe it? :P
5) "Build Changes" should be moved to the end of the guide - you're delaying us from reading what we want to read :D
6) Your guide needs some colour. Even simple red/green for cons/pros would be nice.
7) In your "Runes" section, you should show the reader which runes you currently get, and then the others as "Alternative Runes".
8) In your "Items" section, you didn't mention using
Sword of the Divine's active on towers. The only problem I have with you item build is that you have two Unique Actives that you have to remember to activate. Might get a bit fiddly.9) Your "Situational Items" section is very neat and very informative. I like it. Makes me want to redo mine to reduce it to simplicity like yours.
10) You never explain your passive.
11) Great section! ("Using your skills")
12) ^^ It's clear you haven't read over your Summoner Spells in a long time (Heal: You have lifesteal). I'd also suggest removing the "Bad Options" section. Is it necessary?
14) You just noticed there was no 13)
15) Your Priority list is a bit off-kilter. Why suggest targeting
Singed of all people? Or Dr. Mundo? D:
I'm taking a break... Spent a few hours on this already.
Also, in the future, please only request one guide at a time ^^
Also, in the future, please only request one guide at a time ^^
jhoijhoi wrote:
I'm taking a break... Spent a few hours on this already.
Also, in the future, please only request one guide at a time ^^
Sorry!
Also, I have re-formatted my Akali guide, any better?
EDIT: Getting to the
Jax one.EDIT #2:
Reply -
1) Attack Damage = HP for
Jax. :]2) Haha.
3) This is Dyrus's build (2000+ ELO Player), I just didn't like any of the other guide's on here so I imported one to this site, but I've edited the optional items and wrote the whole guide to my opinions. All that's his is the build. o:
4) Haha I love the stories.
5) Will try to make it longer.
6) Possibly. Just prefer these, and since
Jax's early game sucks he needs Attack Damage runes to make his early game easier.7) Will get to it :P
8) HAHAHAHHA... Yeah. :D
9) Will try to edit.
10) Thanks!
11) How??? I tried so hard to embed it, it doesn't work T.T;;
Rudmed
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Reply to criticsm.
1) AD build, wild cards do very little damage, but I suppose I could suggest maybe getting a point in them. Though I would not.
2) Ghostblade does more damage than BT with enemies above 40 armor. While I may try BT with this build, I may return it to the alternate item section. Ghostblade while I mention it for the escape, but I need to update that. Thank you for pointing that out.
3) I thought I put it down as an alternate? If I didn't I need to make that change.
4) Just now started saving screenshots, so its time to piss everyone off and go AD! YEAH!
5) Yeah just thought it would be a good idea to inform them before they dove into the build for those who come back.
6) Kay....rainbows AWAY!
7) Yeah okay, good idea.
8) SOTD's active doesn't work with towers...I tried it. I was really sad. As for the unqiue items, set it the the two most used keys of you're champ. for example I use W as TF, so 2 and 3. I might put that in there, but gonna suggest user comfortability.
9) Thank you.
10) I guess I can put that in due to the global passive change.
11) Yeah tried to throw examples in there with destiny, but I don't have video recorder, so...yeah.
12) Yeah something else I need to update.
13)...wait what?
14)......... *in rammus voice* Okay.
15)I should clarify that, it is suppose to be most important on top, and then work you ways down.
Alright that is my reply, and now I have to +rep you...and then do it again in 24 hours. Don't worry the tank guide has rainbows all up in thar.
Thank for your opinion, and thoughts.
1) AD build, wild cards do very little damage, but I suppose I could suggest maybe getting a point in them. Though I would not.
2) Ghostblade does more damage than BT with enemies above 40 armor. While I may try BT with this build, I may return it to the alternate item section. Ghostblade while I mention it for the escape, but I need to update that. Thank you for pointing that out.
3) I thought I put it down as an alternate? If I didn't I need to make that change.
4) Just now started saving screenshots, so its time to piss everyone off and go AD! YEAH!
5) Yeah just thought it would be a good idea to inform them before they dove into the build for those who come back.
6) Kay....rainbows AWAY!
7) Yeah okay, good idea.
8) SOTD's active doesn't work with towers...I tried it. I was really sad. As for the unqiue items, set it the the two most used keys of you're champ. for example I use W as TF, so 2 and 3. I might put that in there, but gonna suggest user comfortability.
9) Thank you.
10) I guess I can put that in due to the global passive change.
11) Yeah tried to throw examples in there with destiny, but I don't have video recorder, so...yeah.
12) Yeah something else I need to update.
13)...wait what?
14)......... *in rammus voice* Okay.
15)I should clarify that, it is suppose to be most important on top, and then work you ways down.
Alright that is my reply, and now I have to +rep you...and then do it again in 24 hours. Don't worry the tank guide has rainbows all up in thar.
Thank for your opinion, and thoughts.
In my eyes there is only justice
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Response to criticism:
First off I would like to say thank you, for the criticism and the congratulations.
1. The change to attack damage quints because of its interaction with your passive and Last Whisper as well as the benefit to last hitting (not that you need it, it just makes it a bit easier). ArP quints only made a slight damage increase on non critical autoattacks, so it really is a bit of preference I suppose, I feel like the early game help is a bit nice.
2. I might change the skilling order to get hawkshot at level 2 instead of frost shot. Or maybe level 3
3. Really I don't recommend more than 2 doran's blades. I think the extra damage and health really help you in the lane. I also saw it being done in the dreamhack games, which really swayed me in that direction
4. Yeah, I was a bit on the fence about where to place this point. I mean 15% magic penetration on your arrow only is pretty negligible, about 10-20 damage if they have 50 magic resist. But I mean the 1% attack speed is really nothing either, so I guess it really is hard to tell.
5. Honestly, I really loved everything in your guide, the only issue I had with it was that it was so long. I kind of just wanted a more concise version of everything. This is not to say you didn't have some very amazing and helpful information in there. I just wanted to focus this guide on being more simple and concise.
7. Yeah I know what you mean, conclusions have never really been my strong point, restating what has already been said can get redundant and I feel like I do it enough already throughout the guide, but I may try to summarize things a bit
+Rep and stuff for your trouble
First off I would like to say thank you, for the criticism and the congratulations.
1. The change to attack damage quints because of its interaction with your passive and
Last Whisper as well as the benefit to last hitting (not that you need it, it just makes it a bit easier). ArP quints only made a slight damage increase on non critical autoattacks, so it really is a bit of preference I suppose, I feel like the early game help is a bit nice.2. I might change the skilling order to get hawkshot at level 2 instead of frost shot. Or maybe level 3
3. Really I don't recommend more than 2 doran's blades. I think the extra damage and health really help you in the lane. I also saw it being done in the dreamhack games, which really swayed me in that direction
4. Yeah, I was a bit on the fence about where to place this point. I mean 15% magic penetration on your arrow only is pretty negligible, about 10-20 damage if they have 50 magic resist. But I mean the 1% attack speed is really nothing either, so I guess it really is hard to tell.
5. Honestly, I really loved everything in your guide, the only issue I had with it was that it was so long. I kind of just wanted a more concise version of everything. This is not to say you didn't have some very amazing and helpful information in there. I just wanted to focus this guide on being more simple and concise.
7. Yeah I know what you mean, conclusions have never really been my strong point, restating what has already been said can get redundant and I feel like I do it enough already throughout the guide, but I may try to summarize things a bit
+Rep and stuff for your trouble
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+Rep for your work :D
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Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Why not? :D And coz you are a pro editor reviewing person and might catch some things I missed (even though I was editor of my school paper, and I proofread EVERYTHING, even posts usually ^^)
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything your heart desires <3
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+Rep for your work :D
and I'll submit a request :D
Guide For: meeeee
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Why not? :D And coz you are a pro editor reviewing person and might catch some things I missed (even though I was editor of my school paper, and I proofread EVERYTHING, even posts usually ^^)
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything your heart desires <3
Guide Link: My Kat guide that just hit 1 mil views! :DDDDDDDDD
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