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[quote=jhoijhoi]The problem with yellow is that when I re-review guides I say "Edit:" and it's in yellow.[/quote]

[quote=Nighthawk]Use that blue in your sig then, that's fine with me.[/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf][quote=Nighthawk] [b][color=yellow]A wild NIGHTHAWK appeared! Wild NIGHTHAWK used Review Guide![/color][/b] [color=#ff0000] Review for:[/color] [color=#CEBC39]Lugignaf's [[Udyr]] Guide [/color] [b][color=#ff0000]Constructive Criticism[/color][/b] [list] [*] Okay so first of all, I notice your starting item is a ca + 5 like normal. However it would be nice if you mentioned some different starting routes besides just ca. There's stuff like a [[Long Sword]], [[Boots of Speed]], [[Dagger]] and [[Turtle Stance]] jungling, where a [[Long Sword]] would be best, probably followed by a [[Dagger]] (I feel I need to do some testing to find out the times on each of those)) [*] Secondly...you know I love [[Tiger Stance]] bro...but...that nerf on his ratio leaves me wondering whether or not it's remotely as fast as it used to be and whether it might just be better to go with [[Phoenix Stance]] for jungling. [*] Uhm, your items now/ :O I like the general items for sure, but...I am kinda surprised you mentioned [[Hexdrinker]] but not [[Warmog's Armor]]. If you go Warmog's you can go armor/lvl with no problems, combined with mr/lvl and a banshee's + atma's makes you more tanky then your current build (surprising right :O). [*] I like Wriggle's too, but atm there's no real incentive for them to focus you, so I recommend a bloodrazor or a triforce. Bloodrazor is better for Tiger Udyr though. [*] Forgot to mention that about your routes you can mention starting at wolves, red and small golems as well. Stonewall video would be perfect here too. [*] Aegis is great on Udyr, and I would consider replacing [[Frozen Heart]] with it if the enemy team isn't completely made up of melee/ranged carries cause you get a fair amount of mr from it. [*] Not quite convinced about how good [[Guinsoo's Rageblade]] is compared to a Triforce...just not seeing the AP all that useful tbh. And you already have tons of AS from Tiger, soooo. [/list] [color=#ff0000]Verdict:[/color] Like it. Has nice formatting. Could use a couple of screenshots and videos but is still good. Feels short but is pretty well explained. Head on down to [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/build-and-guide-discussion/will-review-for-food-i-will-read-your-guide-6053?page=1]Jhoi's review page[/url] if you want to catch me for some more comments, or pm me. I'll try and check back here, but I post a lot and tend to forget where I posted >.> [/quote] 1. Yes I know I just mentioned the most common. I was also going off the most aggressive routes. Turtle jungling is slow IMO and I don't like it. 2. Just played it in a normal. The nerf on tiger did almost nothing to his jungle time. Also, I don't appreciate you trying to force Phoenix jungling on my clearly Tiger styled guide. So... tyvm. 3. Don't have an answer to this as these are just theories. i have never had to deviate from the main item path too often. 4. I talked this over with Jet. (I know. Terrible idea.) He pointed out that, after the "bug fix" of Turtle proccing on Madred's Razors, you don't have a reliable sustain as much anymore and this is essential. Testing it in a few other games, I have to agree. Bloodrazor doesn't bring a whole lot to the table compared to Lantern. Sure you heal a bit more off Turtle but, unless they are stacking HP it's not worth it to lose out on a free ward. 5. I totally spaced out on Aegis. I'll put it in the alt items. 6. The AP is more for if your transitioning to "tower push" mode because of how it works with Phoenix. The AS is a nice bonus and also factors well into your tower push speed.[/quote]

[quote=Searz][quote=jhoijhoi] 3) [[expanded mind]] > [[perseverance]][/quote] Whaaat? Typo? EVERYTHING>[[Expanded Mind]]...[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]No typo, he had [[perseverance]] instead of [[expanded mind]]. Then I said [[greed]] > [[expanded mind]]. ^^[/quote]

[quote=Freddy Shopan]The suggestions for the last one were so good, I had to ask again! My second guide! I just finished today! :P Guide For (champion): Sona Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Back for another! And I'm not quite as sure about this one. What I'd like you to focus on: The feeling of the second half (on gameplay, warding, clairvoyance. All of that stuff). It doesn't look clean to me for some reason. Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sona-building-the-musical-masterpiece-106109]This one![/url] EDIT: OHHHHHHH. It's 'cuz I have no pictures, huh? EDIT NUMBAH 2: Okiedoke! Try reading it now! :][/quote]

[quote=Goffterdom]Thanks so much for your review [b]lady[/b] Dont know if I should post this here but meeh. 1) Going to test other runes for glyphes. 2) [[Quicksilver Sash]] allow you to debuff whenever you want, [[Banshee's Veil]] often forces enemies to cast a useless spell on you before actually nuking your face out of your body. About [[Youmuu's Ghostblade]], as I said in my guide, I'm not taking this because it's active cost too much in the item price considering [[Highlander]] already gives you cocaïne. AS cap is 2.5 if I remember well, using both Youmu and your ultimate is too much imho. 3) Fixed 4) Fixed some mistakes but not all of them. 5) Fixed, sorry for such a silly mistake. 6) To improve presentation. Thanks btw ! 7) Hmm, didnt find it. 8) With the "[ Goto ]" functions ? And "[ Anchor ]" ? I tried it for a french guide but either the site bugged yesterday either it makes my firefox crash. 9) No, sorry but I like them :P 10) Hmm, I would ! It defenitively is gold efficient if you manage to play well. Especially to save gold for something else than [[B. F. Sword]]. 11) I dont mind at all ! 12) Ability Mechanisms looks like a more "technical section" imho and should appear at the end of the guide if I follow the same logic than the rest. So finally, I thank you again. Because you Vet Vote me. My guide is at the top of the list. Wtf ! [b]Thanks you so much[/b]. Your review has been really appreciated too, I'll likely add videos ![/quote]

[quote=Piksel4o][[Perseverance]] > [[Perseverence]] , btw xD[/quote]

[quote=Tol Eressea]Thanks very much to Nighthawk for taking the time. I'd still appreciate a glance or two by jhoijhoi if she has a free moment, but I wanted to stop by and let you know I've already updated it to address a number of the legitimate concerns/questions posed by Nighthawk. All the best, Tol[/quote]

[quote=Searz][quote=jhoijhoi] No typo, he had [[perseverance]] instead of [[expanded mind]]. Then I said [[greed]] > [[expanded mind]]. ^^[/quote] Well.. still: [quote=Searz] EVERYTHING>[[Expanded Mind]][/quote][/quote]