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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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@the people I haven't reviewed yet: I will get to it! I am currently in my home town, celebrating my partner's father's 50th, and we had to fly here, so I'm kind of tired.

And I'm still sick.

So I'll get to reviewing soon, I promise :)



!!! AM ON VACATION FOR TWO DAYS ^^ !!!




Reviewable Guides

Guide For (champion): Shaco
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I feel that I have found a new perspective for Shaco in the current meta, wherein squishy assassin-dps is not always the right call.
What I'd like you to focus on: Please focus on the viability of this guide in higher elo/ranked/competitive play. Any additional comments with regard to sections missing, etc. would also be appreciated.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shaco-unstoppable-jungle-tanky-dps-102477

kin333x wrote:

Guide For (champion): Wukong
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: i think i might have forgot something, or failed at writing it AGAIN!
What I'd like you to focus on: the guide itself
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-the-tanky-dps-106043

Phaux wrote:

Guide For (champion): Orianna, The Lady Of Clockwork
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To improve both the guide and the number of viewers it might get. I'm looking to improve not just my own Orianna play, but everyone else's play aswell.
What I'd like you to focus on: Focus on every tiny aspect of the guide you can find, I'd love to hear everything, but mainly the item build and reasoning behind it.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/orianna-an-in-depth-ap-caster-guide-106382

Lugignaf wrote:

Guide For: Udyr.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It's kind of new and after the Lanedyr nerfs, this is really the only way to work him now.
What I'd like you to focus on: The content. Formatting and humor. I know my information is correct and it's what I stand by myself. Unless someone provides compelling evidence that I'm way, way wrong, it will not change much.
Guide Link: *Le Derp*


Guide For (champion): Sona
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Back for another! And I'm not quite as sure about this one.
What I'd like you to focus on: The feeling of the second half (on gameplay, warding, clairvoyance. All of that stuff). It doesn't look clean to me for some reason.
Guide Link: This one!

Did I miss anyone?
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Given that Nighthawk already reviewed mine, don't kill yourself over it. Just know that I'd really appreciate it :) Enjoy your vacation!
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Feel better, and have fun :D

Thanks to TRUeLM, Plastictree, Scrax, Xiaowiriamu, foggy12, JahGFX, jhoijhoi, msrobinson, JEFFY40HANDS, Nyoike, MissMaw, and me :) for the sigs!
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jhoijhoi wrote:

ChefoSLR's Leona Guide
Verdict: A solid off-tank Leona guide that the author clearly has put a lot of time and effort into.
Possible Improvements: I think the author needs to work on their grasp of spatial grammar and have a look at their guide from a new perspective. Do the columns really suit that much information? The guide is certainly in-depth enough, so the only other suggestions I could make are adding in some more images for visual relief. Is Leona even a viable pick?

Constructive Criticism:

1) :/ As you do not buy Ninja Tabi or specify for dodge chance in the defence tree, I would definitely recommend swapping out those Seals of Evasion for Seals of Armour. Also, Marks of Warding are pretty bad, as an off tank, I'd suggest Marks of Magic Penetration, or Desolation.

2) I have no problem at all with your item build beyond the fact that it is very expensive, and that you may like to purchase Glacial Shroud a little earlier in your purchase order.

3) Expanded Mind > Perseverance

4) Greed > Expanded Mind

5) Your green is a little too fluro :P I tend to use Dark Green, as it is less assaultive to the eyes. Also, it's not entirely necessary to colour the whole list. I know it's a pain to colour just the hyphens, but I find it looks nicer.

6) Can't touch this? :P

7) All masteries have now been iconated. ie: Veteran Scars .

8) Like I detail in my guide about making a guide, add "space" in between your columns.

9) Why would you go Skill Sequence > Items > Skill Assessment? That makes no sense. Should be: Skill Assessment > Skill Sequence > Items.

10) With your Partner section, I'd suggest centring those large champion icons, as it looks pretty lopsided the way it is now.

11) I don't know about you, but I find the large use of those icons an eyesore as it creates weird spacing between the lines of your paragraphs. It's often better to just use Akali as opposed to .

12) I think you should remove the title beginning "Summary" as it just looks weird.


Thank you for reviewing my guide!
I completely agree with your critisizm and will gladly make the necessary changes. This is my first "colourful" guide, so I hope I improve over-time.
I have a question, though. Should I just repost my guide? I switched off "require comment to vote" for a night and the rating went completely downhill. With these 50% atm, I doubt many people will be convinced to look at it.
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Lugignaf wrote:



1. Yes I know I just mentioned the most common. I was also going off the most aggressive routes. Turtle jungling is slow IMO and I don't like it.

2. Just played it in a normal. The nerf on tiger did almost nothing to his jungle time. Also, I don't appreciate you trying to force Phoenix jungling on my clearly Tiger styled guide. So... tyvm.

3. Don't have an answer to this as these are just theories. i have never had to deviate from the main item path too often.

4. I talked this over with Jet. (I know. Terrible idea.) He pointed out that, after the "bug fix" of Turtle proccing on Madred's Razors, you don't have a reliable sustain as much anymore and this is essential. Testing it in a few other games, I have to agree. Bloodrazor doesn't bring a whole lot to the table compared to Lantern. Sure you heal a bit more off Turtle but, unless they are stacking HP it's not worth it to lose out on a free ward.

5. I totally spaced out on Aegis. I'll put it in the alt items.

6. The AP is more for if your transitioning to "tower push" mode because of how it works with Phoenix. The AS is a nice bonus and also factors well into your tower push speed.


1) I know turtle jungling is slow but with some as runes it's at least marginally good and you do have a healthier jungle.

2) I'll take your word that the nerf did nothing to his jungling. I sure hope it didn't. Wasn't really trying to force you to go phoenix (if you've seen me post on elementz guide and around the forums, you'll know that I hate Phoenix with a passion and love Tiger) just wondering exactly how viable it was compared to Phoenix.

3) Fine with me, it's only my preference. Not so much theories as just stats, I prefer getting a cataclyst, giant's belt and chainvest early and then finishing things up so I have a good amount of health early game and am more defensive and then I can go into offense.

4) Free ward's are quite nice I admit, it's just that as a tanky dps you need some sort of damage or your essentially just a walking meatshield with a stun. You might consider taking a sv instead of wriggle's and going into bloodrazor.

6) I agree that it's a pretty nice tower pushing item, but a black cleaver is a much better tower pushing item, and you don't really waste ap (i've always thought they would need to up the ratios on phoenix to make ap worthwhile, or introduce some ap into tiger say)


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Champion Guide for: Leona, revamped

Reasons why I want you to review it: I think I did a really god job of following your advice from your last review. I haven't missed a thing and have added a lot more content, as well as changing some to better fit the build.

Things I want you to focus on: Primarily the changes, I hope everything's perfect now.

Link: Leona, Bloodstained Light (Updated)

To anyone who enjoys playing tanks and particulary Leona, please take a look at my guide and comment. I value constructive critisizm.
Enjoy your vacation! Read my guide whenever you can, I'm in no rush.
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Guide For (champion): Orianna
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I put in a great deal explaining how to play AP Orianna correctly including Early, Mid and Late Game. The different way your ball can be used. I've also outlined all the possible items that you could use and when you should be getting them (including core starting build).
What I'd like you to focus on: The guide and the skill order. I have explained a lot here about all her different factors.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/play-with-my-balls-complete-detailed-ap-orianna-guide-106580

Thanks in advance!
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Guide For (champion):
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Its my first guide.
What I'd like you to focus on: My Runes, I'm weak at runes, would appreciate the help
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/minor-support-ad-beast-kayle-107270
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You can take your time getting to mine. I leave tomorrow, and am gone all week. :]
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I would love for you to look over my guide again to see if there anything else that needs to be fixed ^_^.

The Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shadow-killer-on-duty-85584


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