Click to open network menu
Join or Log In
Mobafire logo

Join the leading League of Legends community. Create and share Champion Guides and Builds.

Create an MFN Account






Or

This build has been archived and is for historical display only

This build has been archived by the author. They are no longer supporting nor updating this build and it may have become outdated. As such, voting and commenting have been disabled and it no longer appears in regular search results.

We recommend you take a look at this author's other builds.


x
Not Updated For Current Season

This guide has not yet been updated for the current season. Please keep this in mind while reading. You can see the most recently updated guides on the browse guides page

x

Need A Review? Why Not Ask Us?

Need A Review? Why Not Ask Us?

Updated on March 26, 2012
8.9
61
Votes
6
Vote Vote
League of Legends Build Guide Author GrandmasterD Build Guide By GrandmasterD 61 6 127,653 Views 202 Comments
61 6 127,653 Views 202 Comments League of Legends Build Guide Author GrandmasterD Build Guide By GrandmasterD Updated on March 26, 2012
x
Did this guide help you? If so please give them a vote or leave a comment. You can even win prizes by doing so!
Vote
Comment

You must be logged in to comment. Please login or register.

I liked this Guide
I didn't like this Guide
Commenting is required to vote!
Would you like to add a comment to your vote?

Your votes and comments encourage our guide authors to continue
creating helpful guides for the League of Legends community.

Choose Champion Build:

  • LoL Champion: Xerath
  • LoL Champion: Kassadin
  • LoL Champion: Vladimir
  • LoL Champion: Viktor
  • LoL Champion: Fizz
  • LoL Champion: Sivir
  • LoL Champion: Amumu
  • LoL Champion: Riven
  • LoL Champion: Janna
  • LoL Champion: Morgana

Prologue

Summoners, Behold...



GrandmasterD and Wayne3100 here ready to review your guide on MobaFire! Yes, we stole jhoijhoi's idea and we created a guide about reviewing as well. We may not be the most original people around here but we do our best.

Well what is all this stuff about? We are offering our time to review your guides with only one intention: improving the MobaFire community. So, if you have a guide you would like to have reviewed please make a request in the comments below. However, before you make a request, please check if you fit our requirements:
  • You must be able to prove that you know what you are talking about. In other words, you must be summoner level 20 or higher as this means you will have enough experience from our point of view (We will check this on League of Legends if we suspect you are lying but you would not do that, would you?).
  • Use the request format given below. Seriously do this, we do not want to decipher all sorts of formats.
  • If you ask one of us to review your guide, we expect you to update your guide based on the feedback that we've given. We're reviewing to improve guides, remember.

Now you might ask, "what do you guys want in return?". An excellent question if I might say. Well, we have already said that we do this to improve the community and this is true. However, we would like it if you would at least thank us for reviewing your guide. Also, leaving a comment on one of our guides is greatly appreciated (that is, once Wayne manages to publish his Galio guide). A +Rep is nice, but not a necessity.

Only one thing remains to discuss: the format. The format we would like you to use in your request is the following:
My name on Mobafire:
The name of the guide:
The champion or subject it is about:
Why I want this reviewed:
Who I want to review my guide:
Guide Link:

The 'Who I want to review my guide' step is completely optional and is just a preference, we cannot guarantee that the person of your choice will review it. For example, asking Wayne to review a guide on Xerath will probably not be an interesting review. He will probably just whine about colour choices and stuff. The same story applies to GrandmasterD and a guide about Vayne. Generally, it would be best to ask Wayne to review a guide about AD carries and support champions, while GrandmasterD would be the better choice for guides about junglers and AP carries.

We almost forget something to mention. When your guide has been reviewed you will get a week to respond to it and two weeks to make some changes. If you cannot live up to these deadlines please PM the reviewer of your guide to make an agreement. After these two weeks, or whatever the deadline may be, we will make changes to our review based on your changes and that will be our final review. This will be the review that we'll use to decide if we will up- or downvote your guide.

Yours sincerely,
GrandmasterD and Wayne3100
Back to Top

How Are We Reviewing?

We have, as everyone else, our own style of reviewing and we think you should know our M.O. First, we have decided to rate the guide at four different criteria:
  1. Viability - How viable is it to use this build/guide and to apply it in your everyday playstyle? Is the guide truly teaching good things, or is it just harmful?
  2. Grammar - When talking about grammar we are talking about spelling, chapter order, syntax, etc. We believe that good grammar is a necessity for a good guide. If people cannot read it properly, whats the point of writing the guide in the first place?
  3. Visual Appearance - Is the guide real eyecandy or do our calculus books look more appealing to us? This is not something that we take heavily into account but we certainly think it is worth mentioning.
  4. In-Depth - Simply how extensive we think the guide is. Is the guide only providing a single build, or are there more builds to choose from? Maybe there is even a list included that lists viable items or a list of great laning partners.

Of course, not every criterium is of the same importance as the others. Hence, we have assigned a weight to each criterium and this means we calculate the final grade of your guide through the weighted average but more on that later on. Below, you'll see a table that shows the weight that is assigned to each criteria:

Criterium

Viability
Grammar
Visual Appearance
In-Depth

___
Weight

1
0.5
0.25
0.75

The final grade is then calculated as follows:
Final_Grade = (Viability_Grade + 0.75 * In-Depth_Grade + 0.5 * Grammar_Grade + 0.25 * Visual_Appearance_Grade) / 2.5



Grades? What about up/downvotes?

Ah yes, of course. MobaFire does not have a grading system but simply a like/dislike system which is convenient for the average user but a very black and white for us reviewers. However, we have gotten to a solution we think that is fair and square:
If our grade is >0.5 higher than the current rating of the guide, we'll upvote!
If our grade is >0.5 lower than the current rating of the guide, we'll downvote!
If our grade is within the margins of 0.5, we will not vote!

It's that simple! As stated earlier, you will get some time to make changes to your guide. We will up- or downvote based on the final review not the first review.



Template

Below I have listed the review template we use, take a look at it so you can easily understand your review. Not that its hard to decipher though.





Fizz


8


7.5


9


6



_____


7.4

__

Fizz - Something's Fishy


By: GrandmasterD




Well this seemed like an interesting guide when I started reading and I was pleasantly surprised. The build and mastery setup had some minor flaws but are very viable to go with, even in ranked play! The author seems to have quite good skills in the English language but chapter order isn't really logical and the syntax used by the author is sometimes very confusing. However, the guide looked amazing! It is real eyecandy that made me almost forget to read the actual content. The guide is full of icons, colours and images, really beautiful. Something I am less pleased about is the length of the guide. The guide is not very in-depth, it does provide a list of alternative items but that list is very short and does not really help the reader going. This could certainly use some improvement.

tl;dr

Pros

+ Good build, not entirely optimal but its great.
+ Easy to comprehend and to read.
+ Absolutely amazing to look at!
+ Offers help when normal situations do not apply.
_____
Cons

- Not very in-depth.
- Syntax can be very confusing.
- The build used is very expensive.

The grades in the template are given in the same order as specified in the table (i.e. viability, grammar, visual appearance, in-depth). Hence, the example review given above had an 8 in viability, a 7.5 in grammar, a 9 in visual appearance and a 6 in in-depth.




Well, I guess that is it. Oh wait, some final remarks before you do your request. It is so easy to score some extra points on your review. Below, I have stated a few tips on how to do that.
  • Do a grammar/spelling check. This guarantees that you will score at least an 8 in grammar.
  • Test your build over and over again. How often do you complete it? Is it not too expensive? And... is it optimal, or are there better items available?
  • Make use of basic things such as paragraphs, images, icons and columns to at least get a decent grade in visual appearance.
  • Check your guide how you can improve it. For example, is it elaborate enough? Is there an option available for every situation or is it just about one solid build? It is so easy to at least add some extra builds.
  • Check jhoijhoi's guide on how to make a guide. It offers a huge amount of tips and tricks, also you can learn by example.

If you can think of any other tips you have for others, please say so in the comments below. Ok, now we are truly done with talking, below we have listed all the guides we have reviewed sorted per champion. Yes, that was a lot of work but we did it.

Now, go forth fellow summoners. Bring joy to us with your requests and let us bring enlightenment to the MobaFire community!
Back to Top

Review List

Current Status: Closed




Below you will find a list with all the guides that are currently on our list to be reviewed.
Above you can see the current status of our review shop: open means that you can make a request for a review, closed means that we currently have too many guides waiting to be reviewed and that you currently cannot make a request for a review. This is, because we don't want an endless list of guides as we also want some time to play League of Legends ourselves.



Current number of requests: 21



Reviewed guides:22
Back to Top

General Guides


General Guides




NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Akali Guides


Akali


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Alistar Guides


Alistar


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Amumu Guides


Amumu


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Anivia Guides


Anivia


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Annie Guides


Annie


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Ashe Guides


Ashe


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Blitzcrank Guides


Blitzcrank


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Brand Guides


Brand


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Caitlyn Guides


Caitlyn


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Cassiopeia Guides


Cassiopeia


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Cho'Gath Guides


Cho'gath


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Corki Guides


Corki


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Dr. Mundo Guides


Dr. Mundo


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Evelynn Guides


Evelynn


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Ezreal Guides


Ezreal


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Fiddlesticks Guides


Fiddlesticks


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Fizz Guides


Fizz


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Galio Guides


Galio


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Gangplank Guides


Gangplank


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Garen Guides


Garen


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Gragas Guides


Gragas


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Graves Guides


Graves


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Heimerdinger Guides


Heimerdinger


___ ___ ___CH-1 Concussion Grenade___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Irelia Guides


Irelia


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Janna Guides


Janna


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Jarvan IV Guides


Jarvan IV


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Jax Guides


Jax


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Karma Guides


Karma


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Karthus Guides


Karthus


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Kassadin Guides


Kassadin


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Katarina Guides


Katarina


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Kayle Guides


Kayle


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Kennen Guides


Kennen


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Kog'Maw Guides


Kog'Maw


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

LeBlanc Guides


LeBlanc


___Sigil Of Silence___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Lee Sin Guides


Lee Sin


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Leona Guides


Leona


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Lux Guides


Lux


___ ___ ___ ___Finales Funkeln



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Malphite Guides


Malphite


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Malzahar Guides


Malzahar


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Maokai Guides


Maokai


___Arcane Smash___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Master Yi Guides


Master Yi


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Miss Fortune Guides


Miss Fortune


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Mordekaiser Guides


Mordekaiser


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Morgana Guides


Morgana


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Nasus Guides


Nasus


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Nidalee Guides


Nidalee


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Nocturne Guides


Nocturne


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Nunu Guides


Nunu


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Olaf Guides


Olaf


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Orianna Guides


Orianna


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Pantheon Guides


Pantheon


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Poppy Guides


Poppy


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Rammus Guides


Rammus


___ ___ ___Puncturing Taunt___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Renekton Guides


Renekton


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Riven Guides


Riven


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Rumble Guides


Rumble


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Ryze Guides


Ryze


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Shaco Guides


Shaco


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Shen Guides


Shen


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Shyvana Guides


Shyvana


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Singed Guides


Singed


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Sion Guides


Sion


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Sivir Guides


Sivir


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Skarner Guides


Skarner


Energize___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Sona Guides


Sona


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Soraka Guides


Soraka


Consecration___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Swain Guides


Swain


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Talon Guides


Talon


Mercy___ ___ ___Cutthroat___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Taric Guides


Taric


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Teemo Guides


Teemo


Camouflage___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Tristana Guides


Tristana


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Trundle Guides


Trundle


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Tryndamere Guides


Tryndamere


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Twisted Fate Guides


Twisted Fate


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Twitch Guides


Twitch


___ ___ ___Expunge___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Udyr Guides


Udyr


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Urgot Guides


Urgot


___ ___ ___ ___Hyper-Kinetic Position Reverse



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Vayne Guides


Vayne


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Veigar Guides


Veigar


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Vladimir Guides


Vladimir


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Warwick Guides


Warwick


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Wukong Guides


Wukong


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Xerath Guides


Xerath


Ascended Form___ ___Locus of Power___Mage Chains___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Xin Zhao


Xin Zhao


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Yorick Guides


Yorick


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Zilean Guides


Zilean


___ ___ ___ ___



NO REVIEWS AVAILABLE, YET

Back to Top

Other Reviewers

Could it be perhaps that you are unsatisfied with your review? Or do you just want to have your guide reviewed by someone else? Or maybe you want the opinion of more people around here. Well, in either case below we have listed some of the other reviewers who are available as well:

(If there is anyone else who wants us to include him/her as a reviewer in this list, please PM one of us)
Download the Porofessor App for Windows

League of Legends Champions:

Teamfight Tactics Guide